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英文寫作小技巧(上) 學習更多英文寫作小技巧 寫出通順自然的英文句子! (以下內容摘錄自《英文寫作瘦身法》 陳世琪◎編著) 5. 說話不要重複 有時候會受到中文語法影響 重複同樣的意思,讓句子變得冗長 My husband usually returns back at 9:45 p.m. in the night.→My husband usually returns at 9:45 p.m. No people like bitter-tasting salad.→No people like bitter salad. What he had said about the mountain are true facts.→What he had said about the mountain are facts. 6. 避免主字重複 句子裡重複出現一個字 會讓句子變得冗長不清楚 這個時候就要把重複的字換掉 The school has problems solving those problems.→The school has a hard time solving those problems. This interesting teacher knows how to make an uninteresting subject interesting.→The interesting teacher knows how to jazz up a dull subject. 7. 釋放句子動能 有動詞的句子才有活力 將名詞或形容詞還原成動詞 讓句子更簡潔、更有活力 There is insufficient evidence for our recommendation of an expanded investigation.→Insufficient evidence prevents us recommending an expanded investigation. The primary difference between the two boys in this story is one of moral character.→The two...